So I got a zero on my paper because my teacher said basically the citations used were just put in the paper and did not have anything to do with the cited work.
So the previous tutor did not cite correctly and below you will find the feedback from the instructor and the tasks I need completed to revise my paper:
Attached is the revised term paper that you sent me. There are errors, and I have questions about the paper.
Throughout the paper, I see many citations. However, the citations that you are providing at the end of the sentence does not relate to anything that the sentence or the paper is talking about. Also I highlighted sentences that does not have an ending or needing some changes made. This term paper is practically half of your grade for this class. I will definitely be proofreading and grading my term paper hard. Can you please provide me some clarification, and fix the issues within the paper?
1. All previous citations and sentences relating to that citation needs to be removed and replaced with a source where you ACTUALLY OBTAIN THE INFORMATION FROM, which can be confirmed by my instructor when pulling the source
2. ALL SOURCES need to relate to the topic of the paper or my career field
3. DO NOT just throw in a citation to make it look good, the information you cite ACTUALLY needs to come from that source
4. ALL highlighted grammar and sentence issues needs to be corrected
5. Once complete there should be totally new sources with correlating information cited from that EXACT SOURCE, and all grammar issues should be resolved
6. Please format the paper in correct APA style because it’s not formatted right.
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